Echoes from the outside
The shades of evening soul
Step by step dance toward the open windows
Bring out the sounds when the wind blows
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Wow! ! ! ! ! From Top To Bottom Beautifully Wrote! ! ! ! ! With Beautiful Heart Touching Notes! ! ! ! ! Again! ! ! ! ! Oh Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! Such Soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! + another....saved Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Wonderful poem, we could make the world a really great place if we took time to understand each other and truly loved life.
Stay in spirit for life! ! With the joy of your heart. Nice work.
Life is a glorious celebration; your poetry teaches that, very well. Thank you, Soul!
VIOLET SYMPHONY V-ery I-mpressive O-ne! L-ady E-xceptionally T-ruthful! S-eeing Y-our M-ajestic P-oems H-ighly O-pens N-ew Y-ear.... :) Love this poem! ! Just amazing! ! You are a source of inspiration that the world cant afford to lost....! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
.Love that echoes inside must be amplified outside! -Unwritten Soul amazing write...i hardly comment only to let u know m going thr your works...coz i'll always be left with nothing to write comments when you keep writing in all dimensions...! !
REALLY....REALLY.......................REALLY....REALLY.....AMAZING....... IT IS JUST LIKE COOL BREEZE......I CAN'T STOP READING THIS.......
All the pirates on my ship are talking about this fantatic piece of beautiful writing. However, if they all followed this advice I would be out of business. Great endeavor!
Fine. Congratulation. I would like to invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours, Gajanan Mishra
absolutely amazing and fabulous poem.....i wish it could have been done in a shorter format, would have become more enjoyable and more accessible. but lovely write...just the starting lines are worth a million, solidly hold you pinned to the page great write blessed be :) sat
Oh dear friend I cannot find one line not to agree with! Amazing write, powerful, bright! Thank you! ! Of course no less than 10.
Speechless! I can't find the proper words to clearly say what I feel from reading this stunning reservoir of rich words and imagery: Beauty, Love and Talent magically blended in this great reservoir! 10+++ You are an inspiration to the entire World and it is a great pleasure to read your wonderful and touching works! Thank your also for your valuable comments to my humbled poems! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC
Tuning of relationship.A kind of reciprocity must be there., otherwise, it will be discordant. nice!
Together we loose the past hurt, Heal the broken hearts, To ride in the wind blow Echoes outside... ....my dear friends, this is a masterpiece.thank you for sharing it with us...your brother..Siya_! !
Because days and time keep going, so life is moving on Someday, we will meet a moment for us to learn deeply Same to the hearts when we finally fix the strings: : : : : : : : 'tis really the understanding..... Dear soul and wabi sabi you people made this poem so fantastically..... ******** top marks! ! ! !
Wow, so much thought and energy went into this write, put together with such heart felt care. will come back to read yet again later.
From your poet's note it is clear that we may walk togetherness as we share mind because we understand each other...but when we lost it, it feels like a beautiful music have bad interaction between voice, melody, rhythm, and it nothing left but noise....basing on this theme this poem has been inscribed touchingly. Though this poem is slight lengthy yet it is so beautiful and interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.