Saturday, April 7, 2012

Violet Symphony Comments

Rating: 4.5

Echoes from the outside
The shades of evening soul
Step by step dance toward the open windows
Bring out the sounds when the wind blows
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Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2018

From your poet's note it is clear that we may walk togetherness as we share mind because we understand each other...but when we lost it, it feels like a beautiful music have bad interaction between voice, melody, rhythm, and it nothing left but noise....basing on this theme this poem has been inscribed touchingly. Though this poem is slight lengthy yet it is so beautiful and interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 September 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! From Top To Bottom Beautifully Wrote! ! ! ! ! With Beautiful Heart Touching Notes! ! ! ! ! Again! ! ! ! ! Oh Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! Such Soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! + another....saved Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Christopher Tye 18 November 2016

Wonderful poem, we could make the world a really great place if we took time to understand each other and truly loved life.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

Stay in spirit for life! ! With the joy of your heart. Nice work.

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

a lovely poem. I enjoyed the read. life is to be enjoyed.

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Frank James Davis 16 April 2013

Life is a glorious celebration; your poetry teaches that, very well. Thank you, Soul!

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VIOLET SYMPHONY V-ery I-mpressive O-ne! L-ady E-xceptionally T-ruthful! S-eeing Y-our M-ajestic P-oems H-ighly O-pens N-ew Y-ear.... :) Love this poem! ! Just amazing! ! You are a source of inspiration that the world cant afford to lost....! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 17 July 2012

.Love that echoes inside must be amplified outside! -Unwritten Soul amazing write...i hardly comment only to let u know m going thr your works...coz i'll always be left with nothing to write comments when you keep writing in all dimensions...! !

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Ken E Hall 12 July 2012

Magic indeed wisdom in words and a pleasure to read +++10

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Ralph The Elf 24 June 2012

i really like this poem...you really did a great job

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Rain ... 11 June 2012

REALLY....REALLY.......................REALLY....REALLY.....AMAZING....... IT IS JUST LIKE COOL BREEZE......I CAN'T STOP READING THIS.......

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Captain Cur 27 May 2012

All the pirates on my ship are talking about this fantatic piece of beautiful writing. However, if they all followed this advice I would be out of business. Great endeavor!

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Gajanan Mishra 23 May 2012

Fine. Congratulation. I would like to invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours, Gajanan Mishra

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Saadat Tahir 08 May 2012

absolutely amazing and fabulous poem.....i wish it could have been done in a shorter format, would have become more enjoyable and more accessible. but lovely write...just the starting lines are worth a million, solidly hold you pinned to the page great write blessed be :) sat

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Elena Sandu 30 April 2012

Oh dear friend I cannot find one line not to agree with! Amazing write, powerful, bright! Thank you! ! Of course no less than 10.

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Romeo Della Valle 29 April 2012

Speechless! I can't find the proper words to clearly say what I feel from reading this stunning reservoir of rich words and imagery: Beauty, Love and Talent magically blended in this great reservoir! 10+++ You are an inspiration to the entire World and it is a great pleasure to read your wonderful and touching works! Thank your also for your valuable comments to my humbled poems! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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Neela Nath Das 19 April 2012

Tuning of relationship.A kind of reciprocity must be there., otherwise, it will be discordant. nice!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 April 2012

Together we loose the past hurt, Heal the broken hearts, To ride in the wind blow Echoes outside... ....my dear friends, this is a masterpiece.thank you for sharing it with us...your brother..Siya_! !

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Vipins Puthooran 15 April 2012

Because days and time keep going, so life is moving on Someday, we will meet a moment for us to learn deeply Same to the hearts when we finally fix the strings: : : : : : : : 'tis really the understanding..... Dear soul and wabi sabi you people made this poem so fantastically..... ******** top marks! ! ! !

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Heather Wilson 13 April 2012

Wow, so much thought and energy went into this write, put together with such heart felt care. will come back to read yet again later.

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