Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Saturday, September 7, 2013

. Violet In June Comments

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.Violet In June

A violet caught I in repose
Upon a sunbathed bank.
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Adeline Foster
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Annette Aitken 24 July 2016

This is such a beauitful read, I loved it, thanks for pointing it out to me, and aslo thank you for reading and commenting on mine to. Annette

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Hans Vr 25 August 2015

This is a very touching and meaningful poem, Adeline. A great ten. It starts out sad, but an optimism that is palpable, leaves the reader with a good feeling in the end. Look up dear violet, another dawn will come!

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Maya Hanson 15 December 2013

Oh little violet, lift your eyes Above the world, up to the sun; Fear not, for when the daylight dies Another dew will come. Beautiful and inspiring! ~mye3

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Whisperkwane Lamb 19 September 2013

Hope...all living things have it... as you so bravely put it (Another dew will come) ...sunburn is apart of life...her whole world is full of the unexpected happenings...getting pucked by a walker by...a new home she dread...tears for many for reasons...Violet in Violet be still...was she the only Violet? hope not...love and loneliness...are (kin) ...I saw much in your poem...you make me think when I read you...thank you...MS.Adeline

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Diana Van Den Berg 16 September 2013

The reason why no tear was in the violet's eye is that she gave it to me (and a couple more) when I read this exquisite, microcosmic gem.

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Mary Forrester 14 September 2013

Another delightful poem Adeline. Your truly talented.

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John Brown 08 September 2013

This poem reminds me of some of the short stories of Eugene Field. I like his work, and I like this poem.

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Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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