Violent School Students Poem by narayana aghalaya

Violent School Students

Rating: 5.0


Violent School Students

unseen, school.student
attacks a much smaller kid.
no rhyme or reason.
sadistic fence, stealthily
plucks out a.plant at random

Tuesday, March 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: violence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Such incidences are being reported from schools across the country. Why so much violence in their minds? No one is able to explain. It is a matter for worry for toddlers' parents! (P.S: sometimes the space character gets deleted and adjacent words are joined.This problem I am unable to solve)
This is a Tanka poem.It has 5 lines with 5,7,5,7,7 syllables. Lines neednot rhyme. This is a 1200 year old Japanese form of poetry, an extended version of Haiku!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 March 2018

Narayana, such a powerful poem....10++++

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