Saturday, September 8, 2012

Violent Rage Comments

Rating: 4.3

I have been in a violent rage since the day that I was born
First it began when from my mother that I was violently torn
And then from that day that loss of innocence I still do mourn
I am truly the innocent, and at the world I do scorn.
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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

Facts could be it-this woman is cold and has no eggs to deliver....but when you know truth and have played with it for neon carnal desires to be manly-its too late and it also does not matter for another person seeing or knowing it.He will balance life laughing at someones cries like the way he cried sometimes before and the now sobbing person laughed.This world is like that mirror.It always return back what are facts.Truth is controlled by time.therefore life is a chess game but the end of the day a king and a servant are kept in the same box.Games over.It is like that and seldom matters.Hence we are all stuffs for ragbags one way or the other...Well written and articulated poetry here..

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