Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Violence Comments

Rating: 5.0

violence of the past
lingers in my mouth
I spit it out
yet it remains
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Jacob Andrew Jarman
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Vincent James Turner 24 June 2009

not a bad little rant, i am not sure whether this is yet a poem but there are some nice wording in this, i am not an expert in spelling or grammer but i think there should possibly be a comma in this little section a blade, a trigger regards V

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Jacob Andrew Jarman

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