Violence! Comments

Oh Dear Sylvia and Evelyn! We Will for a Poet

and that's why we constantly have wars, shootings, killings and the rest uneasiest occurrences on this lovely earth

Society is oft reigned by the people with the killing DNA

and with the killing DNA will be put in asylums for insane persons

Persons with the wrong DNA (the killing DNA) will get imprisoned sooner or later

Society needs poets like you, my dearest friend Sandra, you oft put the right things on the right place,5 Stars full for this most important shout from the poet's heart

Sadly, violence is rampant in our world. Your poem highlights this problem with heartfelt eloquence. Great writing!