Thursday, November 14, 2013

Vintage Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the ornamental cherry the leaves
Hang oval and heavy,
Golden-green against the sun.
How lovely they are,
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Susy Evelyne
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John Brown 26 November 2013

When I was a boy, me and my mates, in autumn, would walk along the pavement, kicking the fallen leaves as high as we could. I can't kick them as high now though. This poem brought back that random memory for me.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 November 2013

the last stanza is so poignant and heart warming! a great poem, Susy.

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

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