Vinhie At Grandma's Home..... Comments

This poem is very beautiful and mind blowing. A grandmother's call and emotion we can notice. Vinhie, your grandson will definitely come into your lap and play. You will play in the dunes, because, just like Normandy's sunny day you have remembered the past time. Another sweet remembrances you can gain with greater hope. An excellent poem is well penned...5 stars.

" sand brittle" fragile sand or sand candy? I especially liked: " grandma used to sing for you and tell the stories, but now you are telling me the fairytales" " .....enjoyed in the dunes" i'd use " enjoyed the dunes" or maybe " played in the dunes" bri :)