Vindictive Sanctuary Comments

Dont think The Almighty will steer you, but experience will. In my opinion, if there is a God he is deeply goodand forgiving and found in all of us, just for such occasions as we need to draw on our inner strength and self worth! love the poem, just not very religious in this sense.

Terrific poem. I like the content and great poem all around

This one is more into your feelings i like this one

Very nicely penned, i love the way you write. You and i have a a rare talent in writing. thank you for sharing your poems with me.

Wise and deep words that is written with an almost effortless ease.

High range of imagination can be seen here.A brilliant way of expressing...

This again is another wonderful expression. Thanks for sharing!

'Lies have many expressions Can make one follow the mistaken, Love has countless sensations Can make one feel awaken, Seek out the truth from its buried nation As the deception has made it forsaken' I read that part and INSTANTLY fell in love with it. I love it. Awesomely written!

i like this poem i relate 2 the idea of it very well written

Beautifully written, the world is a lie and we each seek our own truths!

You use such powerful words! Again, the intoduction is pretty powerful as well (: the world really is blindfolded today, but good things are always around the corner. And we can also learn from our mistakes. This gracefully portrays so much, and it has many views. It makes me think of a diamond; each view a separate faucet in it, but they're all equally beautiful and strong and create a beautiful and rare piece of perfection. Write on my friend (:

This poem is wonderful. I can see the words and the passion in the 2 verses. I feel what you are saying. i give this a 10. Very nicely written and very nicely portrayed. only thing I suggest is get rid of the preface or introduction. Let your poem speak for itself, This one did. Very well written.

'Seek out the truth from its buried nation As the deception has made it forsaken'i really like those 2 lines, has a powerful meaning when you look beyond the words

have you read the book 'mists of avalon'? i think you would like it, it's sort of like this poem, it's in a womans' point of view of the world and religion, it's a king aurthor story and it's amazing. Read it if you haven't already.

Indeed, it is far too easy to be misled in one's ultimate quest for utopia, than it is to stay true and forever faithful...a bold and honest poem, great job. -LC-

I like the part of the poem that say's 'Ask Almighty to steer you clear'...Amen! ! !

Very well said, I enjoy your concept.

Wise words from a very talented young man! Good work! Constance

Great intro! nice follow up parig. good job!

Truth! Our soul knows the truth, but so few make time to listen. Out Creator shouts the truth but so few make time to tune into him. Manipulators of truth control the media, so many listen. Good poem.