Vincent Van Gogh 80 - Brother Theo & Father Theodorus Arrive To Meet Vincent Comments

Naive, or not, I admire his courage for been his true authentic self.

cont'd: I knew that Theo would treat her in an amicable manner. Their father? I had some doubts. Very happy that he did not disapprove!

Five (5) stars ***** for this. AND I'm on Vincent's side! ! AND, yes, Christine's portrait looks A LOT like my mom did in an old photo! ! ! ! Believe me? Believe ME! ! ! ! bri : )

In the 2nd-to-last line of your very fine poem, I would delete the comma from between 'world' & 'his'.

St.3, line 5: I would use 'all the', not 'the entire'

St.2, line 3: 'respectful' is not the form of the word 'respect' that 'you want'. I think I'd use 'respected' or 'respectable'.

St.2, line 1: I'd insert 'a' between 'but' and 'well'.

(cont.) .......finished well before PH whisked it away against my will! ! ! ! Rats!

YIKES! I had TROUBLE trying to get my comment re Vincent & my great-great-grandmother

I'm back! ! stanza 1: 'serious' in U.S., not 'serios'; 'a woman Of disrepute and degrading profession.'? ? I never knew Vincent knew my great-great-grandmother! ! ! ; 'artistes' (now I know!) means, ...among other things, .....'artists'.

Geeta aka TT, Don't, go too far. I 'have to' 'go pee', but I plan to return, read the poem, and leave comments, AND, if you are lucky I'll throw some Stars your way! ! bri : )

Another great write, my friend as always. Gripping, interesting and inspiring!

Another interesting and important stage in the life of a great artist, Van Gogh. His character is full of mystery, so complicated that every page of his book of life is captivating.

This really is epic, Geeta. A magnificent verse!

At last Vincent found love and peace. Nice to know that his father and brother like Christine. Very interesting.