Sunday, March 19, 2023

Vincent Van Gogh 63 - A Sudden Outburst Comments

Rating: 5.0

After lunch, Jan went to sleep in his mother's lap,
As Kay sat silently looking at her son with affection.
She stroked her son's hair, gently lulling him to sleep.
Vincent kept staring at Kay's delicate features,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2024

Insightful and brilliantly written is this awesome work of yours

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Rajnish Manga 08 April 2023

You have deftly captured the entire scenario and the complexity of Vincent's relationship and his interaction with Kay, his cousin. Thanks, Geeta ji, for such a lovely portrayal.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 March 2023

2) 2) And like the baseball batter who is perfectly poised for the pitch...the pitcher throws him a curve ball...and he strikes out. The poems in this series are throwing curve balls in the form of suspense...and the readers are awestruck!

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Richard Wlodarski 26 March 2023

Another curve ball thrown at Vincent...he swung...and missed. How many can he possibly endure? Geeta, your brilliant style of writing perfectly sets up the reader for what appears to be a positive outcome.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2023

Cont.2 The story showed that Van Gogh liked Kay and when he saw an opportunity that Kay might have liked him too by showing an interest in his works, this act somehow gave him the courage to make a sudden outburst.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2023

A very honest and discerning poem on the life of a great man. Sometimes there are circumstances that could fuel a certain person to talk with no inhibitions.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2023

Another beautiful series on Van Gogh, my friend. Very informative and interesting

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Nabakishore Dash 20 March 2023

Some times people keep talking----irritated and disgusted.your series on the painter imparts lessons.

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M. Asim Nehal 20 March 2023

Another fantastic piece of information......Liked it much.

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Susan Williams 19 March 2023

an artistic sky full of stars, and a fav

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Susan Williams 19 March 2023

oh, this was a very perceptive look at Van Gogh and actually any of us who are so absorbed in their own thoughts that we fail to note the reactions of others---awesome write

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Very truthful analysis of human conduct and behaviour. It is fascinating to read how Geeta succeeded in corroborating the retort (of which the poem is silent yet) of Kay to the exhilarated and agitated outburst of Vincent.

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