While Vincent stood in a daze admiring the ambience
Of the Goupil gallery, lined with fabulous paintings,
Mijnheer Tersteeg, who was walking down the stairs
Stopped, when he noticed Vincent, his former clerk,
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2) Geeta, once again, you've created masterful suspense. And you are so very good at it!
First impressions are so very important. Tersteeg has judged Vincent as a 'misfit'. And he doesn't even know what is ' fundamentally wrong with the paintings'. I'm wondering who really is the misfit.
The narrative is as interesting as it is dramatic. It becomes poignant towards the end. Vincent constantly went through ups and downs in his life.
This poem has now entered the list of Best Poems of Members. Congratulations Geeta
Geeta is quite adept a story teller. The van Gogh story moves on… good piece…. Set backs, failures all marred his life…
The poetess is a genius in English as she has magnificently narrated the incident!
Vincent Van Gogh was casting pearls before swines! His fate? God is to blame?
Enjoying the write up. Loved your style of story telling. Thanks.
Well done, for this great work