Monday, August 6, 2018

Village Woman Comments

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the village woman at mustard fields by the lake
that day took a detour with a handful of noon

spilled pot wet
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Utpal Thaker
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Chinedu Dike 25 June 2020

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice — lovely and very passionate write. I feel inspired by your style of writing. Remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 August 2018

lurching brass on the hip i mumbled over her ringing anklets she arched and smiled waved and turned back........with a handfull of noon...... mystery is in your coinage of words trying to express the inexpressible........ that was my feeling as i read your poem.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 August 2018

Write comment. Great start, Utpal. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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