Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Village Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

“Peig my dear no I wont have tea; ”
To look at you there in your armchair,
Your hair so white in the window light,
Is good enough for me you see;
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Matt Mooney
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Narrative and touching poem of a Lady in 9th decade… With MJ songs made it extra special Peig I’m sure will accept your poetic nosegay Finally one word…we mostly care less of oldies…sorry I’m to say so as I find less poetry on such…Thanks Sir 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Louis Rams 04 October 2009

this is a great narrated story, which you have written so well peig wold be proud, of that i can tell. she came a long way, nine scores today, and told you a story that you had to relay. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! A DOUBLE TEN

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Marilyn Lott 12 August 2009

I enjoyed this, Matt. A lady going over her life at the end of her life which is quite common. You put her conversation so well and allowed the reader to share it. Excellent - '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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