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First and foremost,10/10. This is a wonderful poem of intense pessimism, to which I can relate, as I too feel like this sometimes. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings so frankly and honestly. Thanks for the Poet's Notes too- poetically said, truly said! 'And you crawl thru Time, Knowing there won't ever be The light, to set it right.' - So wonderfully said! 'And now, after so many years, Still remembering, How painful parting is And will always be, As the somber notes of Life, Accompany me.' - You take me along in your journey through pessimism.

Still remembering, How painful parting is And will always be, As the somber notes of Life, Accompany me. .....speechless....still and always a fan.

Sandra, this is very powerful and sad. A sensitive soul, you are, and been hurt too many times, I suspect. Good poem, and notes too.