Friday, October 13, 2017

Viewed From Afar Comments

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I viewed you from afar,
through mists that barred my view
of where we might have kissed,
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David Floren
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

Viewing mist from far amazes mind entirely. With plain burning of view of mind missing love is so sad. A dry heart still grows to acquire love and peace. This is brilliantly drafted poem.10

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