Friday, July 14, 2006

View Your Town Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you're lucky to live in a street in town,
Then stand quite still, glance up and down,
And you will find there, a storybook,
Lines of words wherever you look.
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Ernestine Northover
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Patricia Gale 14 July 2006

A splendid read and good advice to look around and see. Well done!

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Dustin Bennefield 14 July 2006

A laugh but at the same time an adventure. I could smell the iodine. LOL ~Inkweaver

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CAN I MOVE IN? I like this piece a lot.so much going on, but all remaining in its proper positioning...you've intoduced half a town in one work, and with controlled, easy read application...not an easy task...trust me.great work here, Ernestine.''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Duncan Wyllie 14 July 2006

Now here's a poem full of direction and inspiration, Oh so funny this piece: The District Nurse down at No 9, Does a marvellous job with the iodine. Had me laughing lots Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan x

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Leigh A. Hill 14 July 2006

HOW CUTE! makes my life seem like a story-book...such great humor displayed in this poem! i LOVE It starr

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