Tuesday, March 3, 2009

View Of Stupidity.. Comments

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Note: Before you read this I'd like to point out that everything is false. I have no intentions of doing it. I just had nothing to write.. I love life! .. *laugh* then smile...

Keen eyes as I stare down the corner of the room,
laying down in the fire of ice as I meet my doom,
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Nashy Lamen
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Danzen D. 08 March 2009

The picture so clear...I imagine a girl dressed in red...in her own elegant room..it was all so...red...nice poem. The flow...the pain, anger and grief...tears that form in the eyes...the strength of the pain of the heart overpowered physical pain...

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Christine Kerr 03 March 2009

Thank You for adding your first line, Cause the rest seemed to flow with such ease. A very well piece of poetry indeed

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