Monday, May 5, 2014

View From The Summit Comments

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A small boy with a view
From the Everest summit
of his father's shoulders
Passed me while peering
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Susan Lacovara
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Kewayne Wadley 15 May 2014

Beautiful story! I loved the usage of the mountain, the father and the son Nicely done!

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Yash Shinde 09 May 2014

so beautifully crafted my dear! I loved the way u used visual elements here. Its indeed a great feeling to behold the fellow men from above! ....

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Colleen Courtney 06 May 2014

Such a great poem with amazing visuals it creates. I too remember those days of riding high on Daddy's shoulders. Thanks for the beautiful memories.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

This is an amazing poem... Very well crafted..

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Smoky Hoss 05 May 2014

Marvelous mountain metaphor!

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Susan Lacovara

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