Friday, October 30, 2009

Victory Shall Be Yours! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Holy books offer TIPS
On how we should live
Religion is man's creation
Limited truth they do give
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Deodath Debideen
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Ejaz Khan 06 November 2009

A message, well conceived, well delivered, with an apparent clarity. On the whole your perception seems to be intact and carries weigh of logic and glimpse of truth. You're absolutely right that we live in very special era, where opposing forces await a final combat, you have written an inspirational piece, congratulations on completing a beautiful and needed work!

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Antonio Liao 03 November 2009

a thundering faith leads every soul to victory....your already a victor to any cuts of evil....just like the mustard seeds that lives in your heart, then salvation are guaranteed....a sweeten melody of faith, guide with belief that leads to eternity ....thank you for sharing and God bless.... a big star and a 10 +++

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Indira Babbellapati 01 November 2009

basically religions are social constructs...truth has nothing to do with religion. i salute ur profound wisdom...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2009

Take your brains away from their recipes And ponder on the current mores Fight the dark side internally And victory shall be yours.good c ounsel and intelleence must prevail and take thecourse or decide the action. his is only way out for corrective mesure and happiness....10 reading is so interesting and full of wisdon prevails inall the poems....

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Ramin Chaman 30 October 2009

Do not feel evil is invincible Most bodies they do claim If you can preserve your immunity You can consign them to the flame.....10+ i agree with you...

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Rakesh Bedi 30 October 2009

the concluding two lines constitute a philosophy worth a whole human life...... a truth which usually is overseen in the superficiality of the outer world....

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Antonio Liao 30 October 2009

as i close my eyes wonder each lines of your poem.....'you have touch my heart and i have grown”.....a reflective mood wish my desire to read more and more to sharpen some of the intricacies of my faith.....thank you my dear friend...God bless your poem...a 10 +

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 October 2009

Religion is man's creation Limited truth they do give a thought of wisdom 10 marks shan

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 October 2009

Religion is man's creation Limited truth they do give a thought of wisdom 10 marks shan

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