Thursday, November 17, 2016

Victory Of Love Light Comments

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Why do you break in sad or sorrow?
Why do you more again here borrow?
Why do fall in trap of ignorance dear?
Why do not you listen to heart in clear.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Isabel Pimentel 22 November 2020

Love light gives us victory. We het recovery from sorrow and pain. A nice stiff is shared.

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Pushpendra Patel 25 October 2020

Love is just like light of wisdom. We should realize its power. This poem is nice.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

A little ray of light breaks ego of the dark, ... A little candle handles the dark very large, Single candle lights billions candles charge.... Where there is love there does dwell right, ... Lovely poetic expressions, I quote just three.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2016

Where there is love there does dwell right, God's wisdom binds us freely in new light. Father of heaven teaches to be victor in life, Victory of love light surely breaks deep rife. Love light is capable of removing all the darkness, an excellent poem.

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R Soos 18 November 2016

day giggles, night cries - I was reading some dickinson poemhunter earlier, and she used the wind - to show how it acts at different times of the day - to symbolize the aging process. Having that thought in mind brings an extra layer of depth to your poem. The young ones giggle, while the elders left alone in a room cry. Thank you for sharing!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2016

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xWhat a lovely read, such beautiful content 3 May 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x..........very nicely written...so many great lines in this write.....truly fabulous ★ 3 May 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xMagnificent views intriguing sceneries and the amazing advice is amazing ty darling xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 3 May 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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