Victory is ours!
Said one crow to the other,
As they soared in the sky above.
For below them they had spied
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A heartfelt poem. We all fight and struggle to survive. Ultimate victor is death....5***
Golden corn, that was ripe, From which, they would have their feast. Tantalizing ears of gold Laying out row upon row Though as a river when the wind blowed. Very fine imagination bringing us to a great truth. tony
Victory expected and desired word for everyone from little one to old from weak animal to ferocious animal wanna the taste of victory by hook or by crook beautiful poem shared
As I read this poem I made thoughts, Some questions came to my mind. were the farmers real victors? I don't think. Thanks for making us aware, and Congratulations for POD.
Touching expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
A beautiful poem shared. Congrats for being picked members POD.
Congratulations your this poem being picked for poem of the day! !
Simple poemand story, yet explains.. domination of Humans on Nature.. and dispatching the rights of Other Creatures.. Sad though.. but nicely expressed.! 10
a poem of truth? corn always has it's protectors and will never lose! ....................well penned Randy
A beautiful poem with a sweet flow. Nice story with a message that danger lurks near nice things. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.
As the corn waived in the wind! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I looked back at the comments and wonder does this really deserve to be poem of the day twice in less than a year. I enjoyed it this time around as much as the first but there are hundreds of poems just as worthy for an airing. However congrats for the second time on being chosen.
Great imagery. Wonderful concept. Nicely penned. Randy, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Randy, such a wonderful poem of the day... congrats for being chosen.... a huge 10+++++
A very forthright, positive poem. Written with strong convictions. Whilst reading it I couldn't help but imagine a movie I saw years back. Congratulations! ! !
I cannot help but see this as a cartoon animation. The depiction of reality simplified for the child, crows that talk and farmers, probably in overalls, hiding among the crop just to eliminate the threat of those two intelligent, hungry gents of the air. Truth is, corn protects its seed quite well from birds behind a rather tough and hardy husk. Crows are more likely to denude a field when it is freshly seeded. Not to say that I don't enjoy diversions of a tale told simply sometimes.
an interesting poem of contrasting perceptions? well thought out!
The battle of man over nature and man doesn't always win but then neither does nature. A poem of depth which makes the reader think always a plus in poem, I like it. Deserves Poem of the Day 10+++
Randy, so nice to see you get this recognition for poem of the day! I have enjoyed many of your other poem the last couple of years, and this is another good one. Congratulations!
Wow, clever write, vi id and thrilling👍