Victims Of The Past Comments

victims of the past. are they really dead, or just asleep for awhile? somethting to think about. a good read

the whole poem is constantly shifting. like an unidentifiable voice hovering above the tormentor's head and aren't we all that tormentor? very good. dark warning and foreboding. -M

So tormentors beware/Just because their victim is dead Nothing can be truer...

Your poems are so deep and meaningful! It seems as if this poem is about a mans conscience catching up on him. Very powerful!

the title itself meaningful

The conscience like truth will out. A good poem, well done.

i like to say only a great job.

Few words... Huge impact! Introspection / reflection is ultimately our responsibility! Well put together, thanks for sharing!

A great write, expressing the workings of conscience.

Great poem to ponder with such wisdom.

Nice poem with direct message.

nice poem, very meaningful, straight and very direct in sending the message to the wrong doers, well done a great poem, .

the results of our actions always come in time... we are, in the final end, responsible!

Such a deep and clenching analogy! I really like this poem and relate to it! Thank you, Dave, for sharing this lovely and thoughtful work! !

There is a slant in your writing...in a warning voice..one can feel the intonation behind the graph... yes, it does not mean/they do not see...

I love this write... Direct to the point, with an edge we should all be wary of... Thanks for sharing, .. Karen