Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Victims Of The Cold Comments

Rating: 5.0

leaves fall
like tears of sorrow
the last one
goes tomorrow
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Smoky Hoss
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Sara Fielder 16 December 2013

Heart stopping beauty in this poignant piece.

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Noreen Carden 27 November 2013

Great poem Smokey lovely way of describing the changing seasons i give it a ten

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Valerie Dohren 24 November 2013

Stunning poem Smoky, and how I hate the cold.

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Dee Corpolongo 24 November 2013

Another of natures ways of letting us know the cycles of life and the seasons. Excellent poem, Smoky, thank you.

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Lawerence Mize 17 November 2013

Talking my lingo Smoky. Loved the poem.

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Hans Vr 14 November 2013

Wonderful observation, extremely poetically expressed. It is a joy to read this poem. Excellent work

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Gajanan Mishra 13 November 2013

signs given in the trees, good write, thanks.

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