Thursday, August 11, 2011

Vic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swimming, floating, drifting,
Through and through my mind, the air,
Rising, falling, never ever stopping,
Magnified magnificent in the night.
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Chris Haifley
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Aqeb Benazir 15 August 2011

this carries such a cohesive expression and very sublime meanings to the words...I really like this! 10/10! ! the first stanza has a great touch! 'Magnified magnificent in the night.' nice piece.

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