Vibrant Shout Comments

Clever write, indeed!

No more black And no more white A smile on his face Bloomed in peace.....indeed point to be ponder, great poem, wisely composed with the threads embedded skillfully n with the sense of wisdom, liked it very much :)

Beautiful write with reality laid bare in this thought provoking poem!

we can not denied that drink promote pleasure. As some pain pills promote relief. And a huge list of dangerous pleasures so close to us. Just need used it with care and moderation.

Great! A real life picture! No more black And no more white A smile on his face Bloomed in peace. - - - - - -the cream of the poem.