I'm afraid but
I cannot take in
Your landslide defeat
Every second of my life
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You vigorously outstriped My heart depth with your, Paradise piece of love, With your continental smile....great poetic expression my friend! My pleasure revising this fabulous piece of poetry!
Many thanks Dr Dillip for your wonderful thoughts on this write...much appreciated
Dear poet Lungelo, it's an extraordinary way of making protest against social injustice, where another end is deeply rooted with heavenly Love. The poem is a wonderful poetic expression of Protesting Love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us....10 Chandan
Thanks Chandan for your insightful analysis of this poem... I really appreciate all your positive feedback.
The power of love is so beautifully written with prejudices a distant memory as love is master of equality, fairness and loyalty that has no boundaries! I love this brilliant write and it will go on my favourite list of poems! If you have time could you please read my poem 'Reckless Words'
How I much I appreciate your kind feedback on this poem! Sure I will do that...Thanks once again.
Nice to read, so vibrant and vivid picture of such a deep love.
Thanks VS for such wonderful feedback on this poem...stay blessed
Here I am a craftsman drew a picture of heart pure crimson color a sweet fragrance Love within love no dissection is there just a pulsation soft reign of hugs Love within Loves palpitation thousands in the hand of loving craftsman......... great 10+++
Beautiful lines...Thanks for adding positive feedback in this poem
superbly crafted the picture of love is here- You vigorously outstriped My heart depth with your, Paradise piece of love, With your continental smile great 10+++
Wow! A great piece of poetry! Scintillating poetic expression! I liked the way you have abstracted your thoughts so magnificently in this beautiful poem! Loved reading it....10
May God be with the Freedom, For our hearts are in the need Of hope and love in peace, O, alight, may God be with us!
Oh! I love your poetic prayer, anyway....Thanks for laying comments on my work...stay blessed
A poignant and thought provoking poem. A great write that echoes social injustices. Beautifully crafted.10
Thanks Brian with those comments...I appreciate you reading my work
Yes, love is for life is simple, but what are happening now a days? the earth is being filled with enmity, envy, hatred, greed, wrath, , hypocrisy, ............... tie these and loose love, love, love, love, ............. Thanks for sharing,10 You may read my poem, Let Love Be Universal - 1
Thanks with such for commenting on my poem.... and thanks for the invite. I'll read it.
Such a deeply love here, Yawning stereotypes ...to melt in The warmth of love High level of love....10++++
Good rendition of words in an insightful love poem nicely brought forth from the heart. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Lungelo.
I like the way you play with words in here