Tuesday, November 21, 2017

Vibrant Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm afraid but
I cannot take in
Your landslide defeat
Every second of my life
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
COMMENTS
Sam 28 April 2021

I like the way you play with words in here

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

You vigorously outstriped My heart depth with your, Paradise piece of love, With your continental smile....great poetic expression my friend! My pleasure revising this fabulous piece of poetry!

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 August 2018

Many thanks Dr Dillip for your wonderful thoughts on this write...much appreciated

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Chandan Dey 04 July 2018

Dear poet Lungelo, it's an extraordinary way of making protest against social injustice, where another end is deeply rooted with heavenly Love. The poem is a wonderful poetic expression of Protesting Love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us....10 Chandan

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

Thanks Chandan for your insightful analysis of this poem... I really appreciate all your positive feedback.

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Hazel Durham 03 July 2018

The power of love is so beautifully written with prejudices a distant memory as love is master of equality, fairness and loyalty that has no boundaries! I love this brilliant write and it will go on my favourite list of poems! If you have time could you please read my poem 'Reckless Words'

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 04 July 2018

How I much I appreciate your kind feedback on this poem! Sure I will do that...Thanks once again.

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Lincoln 27 June 2018

Best of your best poem....nice to read, with deep emotions..

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 June 2018

Thanks Lincoln for such kind comments

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Valentin Savin 25 June 2018

Nice to read, so vibrant and vivid picture of such a deep love.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 June 2018

Thanks VS for such wonderful feedback on this poem...stay blessed

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2018

Here I am a craftsman drew a picture of heart pure crimson color a sweet fragrance Love within love no dissection is there just a pulsation soft reign of hugs Love within Loves palpitation thousands in the hand of loving craftsman......... great 10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Beautiful lines...Thanks for adding positive feedback in this poem

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Charlotte mbuyazi 13 June 2018

I love the deep meaningful storyline.. Such beauty 🤗

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 14 June 2018

Thanks for commenting the my poem...

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Britte Ninad 05 June 2018

superbly crafted the picture of love is here- You vigorously outstriped My heart depth with your, Paradise piece of love, With your continental smile great 10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 06 June 2018

Thanks Britte with your positive comments on this poem...

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Vincent Kamogelo 03 June 2018

wow this is powerful and real

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 04 June 2018

Thanks Vincent for your acknowledgement of this poem...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2018

Wow! A great piece of poetry! Scintillating poetic expression! I liked the way you have abstracted your thoughts so magnificently in this beautiful poem! Loved reading it....10

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Thanks Dr D for your caregeous comments to my poetry....

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Ismael Mansoor 18 May 2018

May God be with the Freedom, For our hearts are in the need Of hope and love in peace, O, alight, may God be with us!

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Oh! I love your poetic prayer, anyway....Thanks for laying comments on my work...stay blessed

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Unknown Rose 18 May 2018

Great read! Really thought-provoking and relatable.

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Thanks for your positive feedback on my work....stay blessed

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A poignant and thought provoking poem. A great write that echoes social injustices. Beautifully crafted.10

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Thanks for your wonderful and positive comments...stay blessed

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Brian 17 May 2018

Oh! Electric love in the air. simple stunner

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Thanks Brian with those comments...I appreciate you reading my work

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Simon 15 May 2018

I just love this poem... I can't get over it...

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That's good if it reaches you dearly

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Muzahidul Reza 15 May 2018

Yes, love is for life is simple, but what are happening now a days? the earth is being filled with enmity, envy, hatred, greed, wrath, , hypocrisy, ............... tie these and loose love, love, love, love, ............. Thanks for sharing,10 You may read my poem, Let Love Be Universal - 1

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Thanks with such for commenting on my poem.... and thanks for the invite. I'll read it.

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Lovely lines loaded with love!

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Thanks Howard for your comments...

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Simon 02 December 2017

Such a deeply love here, Yawning stereotypes ...to melt in The warmth of love High level of love....10++++

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I'm just glad you feel that way., ,

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Chinedu Dike 28 November 2017

Good rendition of words in an insightful love poem nicely brought forth from the heart. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Lungelo.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 28 November 2017

Thanks Chinedu for your acknowledgement.

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