Thursday, August 6, 2009

Vibgyor - A Splash Of Colour Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lovely fragrance of flowers
Pervades the whole atmosphere
Ceramic pots of little violets hang
Against the indigo coloured screens
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Sandra Martyres
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Patrick McFarland 26 August 2009

This is a wonderful poem Sandra full of beautiful, gripping imagery. A 10+...

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Patti Masterman 25 August 2009

This is such a beautifully classic poem. Your words full of the same vibrancy and aliveness of the thing itself, true art becomes...(smile)

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Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

Such a beautiful piece, Sandra! Really enjoyed reading it. -roshni.

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Yelena M. 11 August 2009

Oh I just wish I could walk through such colorful garden, Sandra, something like that is so rare to find here in Russia :) I fell in deep love with the line 'The deep red rose still retains Pride of place...........'..Beautiful, thanks for sharing! Amary.

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Carl Harris 11 August 2009

This is a wonderfully well written poem celebrating the awesome color of a flower garden at it's peak, Sandra. I liked how you mentioned the delightful colors of nature in this charming poem. Carl.

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Mamta Agarwal 11 August 2009

very vibrant colours, and very cheerful bright poem. indeed a riot of colours- vibgyor. imaginative write, and a good metaphor skilfully used. Mamta

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A gorgeous riot of color Sandra. Violet, blue bells, yellow buttercups and orange marigolds. It is picturesque. Ah! the rose is the icing of the cake. 10 Karin Anderson

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Meggie Gultiano 09 August 2009

a colorful write indeed..wow..i love your last line. Hugs, Meggie

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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2009

Sandra, it is an excellent descriptive poem of color.10+++++ from me

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~ Jon London ~ 07 August 2009

Sandra you create such beautiful and vibrant flows of colour in this stunning creation....very refreshing piece to share my lovely....thank you...it's beautiful...but then again so is all your work 10+++

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Ted M 07 August 2009

Vow! this is so beautiful. So fragrant and so colourful. It's a pleasant treat for the eyes and the wonderful fragrance makes me dream. The nature so nicely penned. V ery I nteresting B eautiful G reat Y outhful O riginal R evelation.............10+++++++

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Lady Grace 07 August 2009

okey, this is a simple but nice theme, , a colorful setting under the heat of the sun.. let me arrange this in normal hues.. R..red O..orange Y..yellow G, , green B..blue I..indigo V...violet your theme is nicely penned..a colorful setting wth colorful scene..

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a lovely and colorful poem, ..nicely expressed

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Catrina Heart 06 August 2009

What a refreshing colorful garden.......well done! ! !

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Ramesh T A 06 August 2009

Nice rainbow colours of Nature is well depicted by your poetic touch!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 August 2009

what a coloful world and what a colorful poem...a pleasant image in words...lovely sandra...10

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Indira Renganathan 06 August 2009

Your rainbow-garden is so bewitching....thanks

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Michael Harmon 06 August 2009

A delicate, pretty piece, Sandra! The Wobniar is a wonderful thing! :)

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