The lovely fragrance of flowers
Pervades the whole atmosphere
Ceramic pots of little violets hang
Against the indigo coloured screens
...
Read full text
This is such a beautifully classic poem. Your words full of the same vibrancy and aliveness of the thing itself, true art becomes...(smile)
Such a beautiful piece, Sandra! Really enjoyed reading it. -roshni.
Oh I just wish I could walk through such colorful garden, Sandra, something like that is so rare to find here in Russia :) I fell in deep love with the line 'The deep red rose still retains Pride of place...........'..Beautiful, thanks for sharing! Amary.
This is a wonderfully well written poem celebrating the awesome color of a flower garden at it's peak, Sandra. I liked how you mentioned the delightful colors of nature in this charming poem. Carl.
very vibrant colours, and very cheerful bright poem. indeed a riot of colours- vibgyor. imaginative write, and a good metaphor skilfully used. Mamta
A gorgeous riot of color Sandra. Violet, blue bells, yellow buttercups and orange marigolds. It is picturesque. Ah! the rose is the icing of the cake. 10 Karin Anderson
a colorful write indeed..wow..i love your last line. Hugs, Meggie
Sandra, it is an excellent descriptive poem of color.10+++++ from me
Sandra you create such beautiful and vibrant flows of colour in this stunning creation....very refreshing piece to share my lovely....thank you...it's beautiful...but then again so is all your work 10+++
Vow! this is so beautiful. So fragrant and so colourful. It's a pleasant treat for the eyes and the wonderful fragrance makes me dream. The nature so nicely penned. V ery I nteresting B eautiful G reat Y outhful O riginal R evelation.............10+++++++
okey, this is a simple but nice theme, , a colorful setting under the heat of the sun.. let me arrange this in normal hues.. R..red O..orange Y..yellow G, , green B..blue I..indigo V...violet your theme is nicely penned..a colorful setting wth colorful scene..
a lovely and colorful poem, ..nicely expressed
Nice rainbow colours of Nature is well depicted by your poetic touch!
what a coloful world and what a colorful poem...a pleasant image in words...lovely sandra...10
A delicate, pretty piece, Sandra! The Wobniar is a wonderful thing! :)
This is a wonderful poem Sandra full of beautiful, gripping imagery. A 10+...