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The last four lines should be in the face of new families looking for the perfect newborn congrats greeting card, I mean I know some poets would not want to hear this because they don't think greeting card work is poetry....and I also know you still wouldn't be too bothered to hear someone say so; =) A new birth is indeed a heavenly event, all mercy and grace for us, and a lingering event if we but let it be... just as it was sent.

Wow this is a poem in great poetic diction and rendered sweet because of the babe's smile. How u employed electrond is superb! Nice to read u again. Hope u will too.

Wow this is awesome in poetic diction and sweet to read. To use electons in poem is great. Nice to read from u again. U may read mine too.

I love the idea of a smile being a lingering event! Beautiful! ! xo