Sunday, February 3, 2019

Veteran Of The Psychic Wars Comments

Rating: 5.0

Turn the knife and you will see
The truth behind the tragedy
Of pain.
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Bryony Sheldon
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Bri Edwards 06 September 2019

2 – Some will say God answered but 'you' weren't listening. i think " God" is a useful tool for some (sometimes for 'good', sometimes 'evil', depending on one's outlook. i just don't believe God exists. bri :)

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Bryony Sheldon 07 September 2019

Your reviews are always so lovely to read, thank you for putting this much effort into discussing poets' work- I'm sure I'm not the only person who appreciates and values it. Have a wonderful day, and I wish you luck to your future.

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2019

1 – " Because all the devils are already Here? " i think most of them relocated to my neighborhood. i'm glad you didn't use Depression (see Poet's Notes) . there are two very different definitions for " chain mail" , but one of them is also spelled chainmail.

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Sandra Josefsson 04 September 2019

I loved this poem. Great depth of emotion and a brilliant description of your grandfathers pain.

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Julia Luber 13 June 2019

Strong writing! Real and assertive.

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Galina Italyanskaya 27 February 2019

Hi, Bryony I'm not a professional critic, but I think it's a strong writing! Thank you for sharing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 February 2019

Effects of war! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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C F 16 February 2019

Turn the knife and you will see The truth behind the tragedy Of pain. ..... Don't you know that is empty Because all the devils are already Here? ... wishing I have crafted these lines, you write very well.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2019

Don't you know that is empty Because all the devils are already Here? Twist the knife.. my grandfather is more worth than........ my dear poet. i am simply taken up by this poem.. this is the best poem i read from you.. go on, write. and spread good ideas to this mad society.... tony

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