Turn the knife and you will see
The truth behind the tragedy
Of pain.
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1 – " Because all the devils are already Here? " i think most of them relocated to my neighborhood. i'm glad you didn't use Depression (see Poet's Notes) . there are two very different definitions for " chain mail" , but one of them is also spelled chainmail.
I loved this poem. Great depth of emotion and a brilliant description of your grandfathers pain.
Hi, Bryony I'm not a professional critic, but I think it's a strong writing! Thank you for sharing!
Effects of war! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Turn the knife and you will see The truth behind the tragedy Of pain. ..... Don't you know that is empty Because all the devils are already Here? ... wishing I have crafted these lines, you write very well.
Don't you know that is empty Because all the devils are already Here? Twist the knife.. my grandfather is more worth than........ my dear poet. i am simply taken up by this poem.. this is the best poem i read from you.. go on, write. and spread good ideas to this mad society.... tony
2 – Some will say God answered but 'you' weren't listening. i think " God" is a useful tool for some (sometimes for 'good', sometimes 'evil', depending on one's outlook. i just don't believe God exists. bri :)
Your reviews are always so lovely to read, thank you for putting this much effort into discussing poets' work- I'm sure I'm not the only person who appreciates and values it. Have a wonderful day, and I wish you luck to your future.