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Lovely piece on rain clouds penned in your own typical style that has a unique imprint.

beautiful poem on cloud and rain from its womb; written beautifully- Nectar will be drunk by dry soil and All creatures and birds will have bath In this perfect wisdom of natural love....///,

They will fly towards Earth soon With their shiny watery wings of joy Doing pitter-patter they will sing And they will dance in new stream, ................. Beautiful description! Enjoyed much! A 10

Showers of rain are graces from God that bring luck. Cloud, and thunder bring rain. These have been vividly depicted in this wonderful write with superb.imagery. Yes, God's wonder is fathomless and infinite. A great poem wonderderfully written.

Victory and Emotion! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wow, so well thought poem, I quote: God has conferred crown of wind and water, Greenness will be vested on Earth after rain, Nectar will be drunk by dry soil and All creatures and birds will have bath In this perfect wisdom of natural love, Crown of wisdom cycle is vested on Earth.

Rain is very apt symbol of love. When clouds rain rain, their shower of love is unconditional. There is enough love in this world, but not all in unconditional. A lovely write.

Another fascinating poem by mr. Mahakul

Cloud is conferred as a crown of rain, As a crown of victory and emotion, superly done. thanks for sharing the poem with us

Thank you very much sir for sharing this lovely poem this morning. I am very happy reading this poem. Is there cloud at your place today sir? Is it going to rain there? You have truly felt God's greatness and written this gem.

Hi darling poet Kumar, this is nice to read again a lovely poem you have vested here. Cloud's journey you have very nicely presented. I love pitter-patter sound of rain really darling poet. Cloud picture is lovely. God has vested peace on Earth. This poem deserves not less than 10.

I always wonder watching sky, cloud and hearing thunder. This poem beautifully draws a nice imagery of cloud and happening of rain. Everything in this nature is wonderful. Thank you very much sir for sharing this.