Vespertina Cognitio Comments

All day, this dredging—beneath the tug of waves—rhythm of what goes out, comes back, comes back, comes back. very good poem. tony

Well executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

Life of fisherman follows the sun as the last source of livelihood In the insane chest of the sea In the darkness of twilight Seeing the poor traveler on weighing of life........ great expressive

for a moment this reminded me of Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Excellent imagery, picture perfect if you've sat and watched them. I enjoyed reading this. Well expressed. tfs

Brilliant imagery! A nice poem of the day!

Really enjoyed this poem. Had a nice flow to it. I could picture in my mind's eye the sea, the pelicans and activity described. Great job.

Dark thoughts crossing the mind! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

" Rhythm of what goes out, comes back, comes back, comes back" . Well deserved modern poem of the Day.

weighing the harvest against the day's losses Very good expression. Congrats dear poetess.

This is like a impressionistiv painting in words.

Beyond the fringe of coast, shrimpers amaze with the harvest. This poem is excellently expressed and this is very nice to read.

Overhead, pelicans glide in threes— their shadows across the sand dark thoughts crossing the mind. Beyond the fringe of coast, shrimpers hoist their nets, weighing the harvest. Powerful observation.. thank u dear poetess. tony

Nearly palpable experience of being on the sea watching shrimp boats and gulls.

Overhead, pelicans glide in threes— their shadows across the sand dark thoughts crossing the mind. In alto, pellicani planano a gruppi di tre— le loro ombre attraversano la spiaggia pensieri oscuri attraversano la mente.

vespertina cognitio / cognizione notturna / evening knowledge

very fine, come back, come back..