Friday, May 29, 2009

Very Wise Self-Advice Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is never at all too late
The time available is adequate
If all bad companies I liquidate
All my problems will quickly abate
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Mailrangam Visvanathan Venkataraman
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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

beautiful write Venkat...you have a rich vocab, no doubt...but to create a poem without loosing sense using a series of like-words is really admirable...good rhyming through out...the expression- i have decided to designate my mind as my subordinate- reads very nice...intelligent work...10

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