Wednesday, July 30, 2008
Very Close Comments
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I stand on this cliff looking at the view,
as I open my arms and calmness strikes,
letting all the pain go away from me,
into the air which just carries away.
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May Namoc
30 July 2008
ooh, powerful, emotional, and great. it's a good poem javi! i love the last line. jump! i feel like doing that sometimes..just to get away from things. love it <3
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10/24/2025 10:19:25 AM # 1.0.0
I dont think the last line could get ANY more ironic...very good..saying JUMP...i wish i could just JUMP right now. jump into something, or bungee jump off a bridge..IDK..but good poem.. <33 mills