Very Busy Still Remember You Comments

An excellent spiritual write. We shall seek and remember Him everyday and everything shall be added unto us. Thank you for this wonderful offering, a great reminder to everyone. Superbly penned.10 and onto my Poem List.

Still i remember! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

The true attachment to is beaming bright in this poem....excellent....thank you Kumar

Though we remain busy whole day long we must take out time to remember Him for all the things He has given us. a nice poem about His gifts to our life. Thanks for sharing.

Wonderful and imageric write on recolling poemhunter, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

Time, Nature, and you are all very busy. Still, it is right to remember the one who reads every poem.... And who gives us life, in order to be able to write all these poems in the first place. A lovely and worthy poem!

Part 2- - This works and works very well indeed! I am drawn by the texture of the images you used no matter how you gathered them. In fact the form of the poem matches the mystical/spiritual theme of the poem. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Part 1- Had to look up definition of this style of poetry and was told Chance Operations are methods of writing a poem independent of the author’s will.. like by throwing darts or rolling dice. Use of some original text cut up in words and phrases and lines then put together.. The purpose is to play against the poet’s intentions and ego, while creating unusual syntax and images. The resulting poems allow the reader to take part in producing meaning from the work.

Fantastic poem and thanks for sharing sir. A true poet both in heart and mind. Always thankful to creature and its creation. I am busy, but I have time for you, I adore your creation and light, Walking very smoothly on Earth, Still I remember you dear, To unite with you I search path, Green mind perceives your grace, I am very busy, Still I remember.

This is a very beautiful poem. I love it. We keep saying we are busy. But the most important is our eternal. We need to remember His grace every day through our thought, word and deed. An absolute full 10

The poem carries a lovely message for those mortals who spare no time for their spiritual pursuits. Thanks a lot for sharing such a nice poem, Kumarmani ji.

A bright write and always bring goodness to smile The way you share this is just soothing as it may give us... Oh nothing can replace You ever

to unite with you I search path, very right sir, namaskar

I am busy, but I have time for you/I adore your creation and light/Walking very smoothly on Earth/Still I remember you dear........Highly spiritual expression! A sublime piece of poetry!

Blessed is he who remembers in busy life..good one