Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Verve Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking by a silent Street
Was a little girl with verve
What amazed me most of all
Was her smiling curve
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Ryson Dsouza
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Norah Tunney 08 April 2016

Enjoyed this poem very much Also It's simplicity and conciseness ! !

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Norah Tunney 08 April 2016

It captures the essence so concisely and so simply Beautiful Ryson

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Paul Warren 28 March 2016

A nice poem that puts you in place. I liked it very much 10

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Palitha Ranatunge 17 February 2016

i like it, simple but meaninful and after reading the reader feels some sadness.

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Ryson Dsouza 17 February 2016

Thank you Palitha.. Enjoy reading

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