Thursday, February 9, 2012

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When the world spins much too fast
It is time to close your eyes
Letting darkness gently pour
Daily cares by heaven's door
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Liilia Talts Morrison
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Margaret O Driscoll 20 January 2016

'Daily cares by heaven's door', great poem, 'your balance is at risk', yes, good to step off the treadmill of life now and then, Liilia

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Adeline Foster 18 February 2014

I like the way each verse begins with the initial thought. Very good. Read mine - O Night - Adeline

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