You have lost your way in your searching
For romance, tenderness, and affection;
And, you have found her: there in the orchestra,
Playing Mozart with her violin, while dreaming of you:
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exquisite, stirred tsunami waves of thought, loved the intensity, the ardent passion of the ride 10+++
I liked the imagery in your poem and the drops of honey in each lines.... The indulgence of your being in your being Against the nature, forgetting your nature; Melting in femininity, devouring lips, tongues and kisses.....SUPERB, short of adjectives to admire this piece...100 on 10.
Surfing Tsunami Waves exquisite passions stir rising on wave birth stirred tsunami waves pulse oceanic ripple thought heartbeats cascade love is liquid intensity ardent passion rides Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Coral Sunset Diana' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.