Verselet Of Ambrosia Comments

You and me a total me or total you, You and me a songless wave, A wave of verselet of absolute ambrosia. - - - -A poem of absolute beauty, thanks for sharing.

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Verselet of Ambrosia, There are some breathtaking expressions, so may to quote here, From the Poet's Note i see that you have embraced so many things here.

A free flowing bitterness.effacement of emotional attachment in a years old relationship.last 3 lines are looking a little odd.it proves the poet's vain effort to establish the fact that despite all the mistakes the beloved person has made they will remain one. -laurraine

The debris of absolute zero......great piece. Thank u, dear friend. anjandev roy.

I am a silent song without tongue, The debris of absolute zero. I am the sound of fluttering wings. Astounding sense of surprise poetics. Excellent Prabir!

Lovely poem, beautiful expressions