Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Verse From The Other Side Comments

Rating: 4.5

Unforeseen calmness, your battered body is freezing,
Like a startled newborn, you are confused and helpless.
You don't know what you are, your senses are missing,
Earth lights are swiftly fading away into total darkness.
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Aram Stefanian
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Aram Stefanian 14 February 2018

Thank you so much for your comment!

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Aram S. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 December 2017

Except that this poem is created in mystical sphere, it also contains many metaphors, bit horrendous must I say, but that is of course to accentuate the content here. According to my shiverings while reading, I must admit that you are successful in doing so. A tiny bit on-nederlands. Thank you for sharing this worthy poem, worth for my innocent belief. A 10 for the poem. Sincerely, Sylvia Frances Chan (Nederland)

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Aram Stefanian 02 December 2017

Hartstikke bedankt, Sylvia! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

Mijn antwoord op jouw reactie: Graag gedaan, Aram. Ik heb er erg van genoten!

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Aram Stefanian

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Yerevan, Armenia
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