Sunday, July 4, 2010

Verse By The Graveyard Comments

Rating: 4.4

Past the graveyard down the road,
Lives or dies a man out cold
Every minute is a burning desire
For him to feel there's nothing higher.
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Ajay Seshadri
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Lyn Paul 28 February 2014

An Excellent write Ajay. I particularly like the title. A great Poem of the day. Congrats.

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Cheenu Srinivasan 20 September 2013

Excellent imagery evoking the feelings of what can only be a desperate person seeking any help he can get even if that were to be a graveyard. 'Will any hand rise from the many dead' is powerful.

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Luna Tsuki 16 August 2013

amazing poem, I congratulate you on the brilliant use of words.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 February 2013

the vagrants try to sleep on the concrete slab of the cemeteries, as those places are more convenient for them to have proper rest and it is the common sight in our part of the world! the idea you had conceived to write this poem is nice...but Yet every minute is a burning desire For him to feel there's nothing higher! as long as the livings have the stomachs, the fire in it will make them to wake up! the stomachs are higher than any else in the world! Congratulations! Ajay! I like your poems!

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2013

Every minute is a burning desire. wonderful.

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Hardik Vaidya 28 February 2013

you wrote this at the age of 27. i wonder what will you write when you are 37. will you leave anything for any one else to write about. Fantastic Ajay, brilliant poem.

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

Smartly well described and well scripted, fully thoughtful and engrossing, I like it.

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Anthony Ruben Lee Taylor 29 February 2012

NICE GO CHECK OUT ONE TRUE FRIEND

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Anthony Ruben Lee Taylor 29 February 2012

nice go check out ONE TRUE FRIEND

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

Yet every minute is a burning desire For him to feel there's nothing higher! ~ Great bereavement yet so touchy moving diction …finality has been finalized … congrats for sharing Sir Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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An inspired poem. Descriptive, well penned! ; D

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