My mind, a field of red,
A work of art within my head,
My eyes, a solemn green,
Casting glances, never seen.
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A poem, tempting, tasting words, Softening lines with gentle verse// wow, superb expression on poetic verse
What a beautiful poem! Appreciate the style of penning! The flow is just immaculate! 10
Parting ways, a lovers tiff, I'm left to wonder.Why? What if? A poem, tempting, tasting words, Softening lines with gentle verse. Beautiful Poem.
Congrats! your mind, your dreams..and you have a beautiful poem.. loved these lines.. Have you seen the blues of deep? I go there in my dreams to sleep. A poem, tempting, tasting words, Softening lines with gentle verse Happy writing!
Congratulations! This is my greatest pleasure to see your poem as the poem of the day. Mind is definitely field of art and colours of green and red. A poem is softened with tender words. Your wonderful vision motivates this poem entirely. We feel casting glances. This poem is excellently penned...10
Excellenty and wisely penned, A poem, tempting, tasting words, ........... a good verse is always such, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us
I'd like to thank each and every one of your for all your wonderful and encouraging comments. I am truly humbled that you all enjoyed my poem. Whoever voted for my poem to be POTD I thank you from the bottom of my heart and thank you all for your votes. This means so much to me :)
Parting ways! ! With the muse of love and life; I'm left to wonder why! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A beautiful creation nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Sarah.
My mind, a field of red, A work of art within my head, My eyes, a solemn green, Casting glances, never seen. - - - - - - A lovely piece of work- - artfully depicted.Congratulations for Poem of the Day.
Very colorful poem with an intriguing picture. Congratulations for having it selected as member poem of the day!
A nice way to describe mind, eyes and sleep as three different colors. A soothing poem thank you!
Like an abstract art, it says what it has to but it is left to readers to draw their own conclusions. Thanks. My mind.... A work of art within my head, Parting ways, a lovers tiff.... I'm left to wonder.Why? What if?
A very colorful write about the mind! Thoughts and dreams become the flavor of it! Congrats to a poem well deserving of poem of the day! :)
Well done Persson........very well crafted indeed......cong. for being selected as P.O.D.......thanks for sharing You have touched to the roots of emotion.....10
The curtain falls in graceful scenes And all around the cosmos breathes, Have you seen the blues of deep? I go there in my dreams to sleep.......have you seen the blues of deep. what a fine poetic question. very fine poem dear poetess Sarah. God bless you. tony