Vernal Kiss Comments

This reminds me of that genre of Chinese poems (Many written by sympathetic men) in which a solitary woman expresses her loneliness and sees no end to it. There is a muted despair in such poems but also deep, deep feeling barely contained within. In your poem, that suppressed feeling breaks out in the most wonderful expression of desire. Your lonely woman has eased her pain by this outburst and it shows she is ready for a genuine love. I wish I could be some demi-god of happiness who could send her her heart's desire.

Beautiful write, full of nature's wonders. The broken wings of a linnet remind me of William Butler Yeats's The lake isle of Innisfree line of An evening full of the linnet's wings...

Wow loved it, loved it and loved it, kisses fly towards the snow and ice - to warn them..... towards a lonely waiting heart - 100++