Friday, February 17, 2012

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What is the use, of trial and error
When in the end everyone, dies in terror?

Love is only known, when it has been taken
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Adeline Foster 22 February 2012

Through all your poems, you seem to confuse your and you're. If you were to check through them all and note the ones where you are is intended instead of the possessive of you it would improve these poem which are good poetry otherwise. Adeline

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