Late in the winter eve,
when a sight is hazed by mist
And the Maple leaves crack with steps
And chirping crickets are well perceived.
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Beautiful write Sir. Unwritten soul is an outstanding personality. I also like her a lot and feel her pain.
Many games of art you have played here: painted a picture with images, made it a literary piece, and dedicated the poem to the lively unwritten soul... thanks for inviting me to read it...
Into Romanticism at last Gulsher. detached and distant in approach. I love the reading of this piece of yours. Growing rapidly. / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / lovely rhythm. You jumbled the rhyming but it worked. Fantastic.
It is a worthful praise on the incarnate beauty VENUS.. The inner charm of poetic perception of her beauty excels the outer charm of your expression. Kudos to you Mr Gulsher
A lovely tribute to Venus, a truly beautiful planet to see in the night sky.
An excellent poem, loved the way u described the eve, And the Maple leaves crack with steps, simple but poetic, i liked the changing rhyme, sweet and melodious.very very very nice, Thanks for sharing
Winter eve clouds...and the stars above it (can withstand cold) ...wow how that nature really hypnotized us with the spirit and gorgeousness..Absolutely a nice and detailed poem...a poem that every reader should cheer of...but what's the weird is the using of venus name..we are all Earth-ians right hahaha and well use of unwritten soul term there_Soul
Many a times i was turned hypnotized by this gorgeous reflection of sweet Nature,
A wonderful tribute to Venus. the poetic perception extremely beautiful. Very romantic and outstanding rhythm.