Sunday, November 25, 2012

Venus View (Embodies Love And Beauty) Comments

Rating: 4.0

Late in the winter eve,
when a sight is hazed by mist
And the Maple leaves crack with steps
And chirping crickets are well perceived.
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Xelam Kan™
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 27 November 2012

A wonderful tribute to Venus. the poetic perception extremely beautiful. Very romantic and outstanding rhythm.

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Asif Andalib 27 November 2012

Beautiful write Sir. Unwritten soul is an outstanding personality. I also like her a lot and feel her pain.

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Shahzia Batool 26 November 2012

Many games of art you have played here: painted a picture with images, made it a literary piece, and dedicated the poem to the lively unwritten soul... thanks for inviting me to read it...

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Jahan Zeb 26 November 2012

Into Romanticism at last Gulsher. detached and distant in approach. I love the reading of this piece of yours. Growing rapidly. / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / \ / lovely rhythm. You jumbled the rhyming but it worked. Fantastic.

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It is a worthful praise on the incarnate beauty VENUS.. The inner charm of poetic perception of her beauty excels the outer charm of your expression. Kudos to you Mr Gulsher

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Valerie Dohren 25 November 2012

A lovely tribute to Venus, a truly beautiful planet to see in the night sky.

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Bright Morn 25 November 2012

An excellent poem, loved the way u described the eve, And the Maple leaves crack with steps, simple but poetic, i liked the changing rhyme, sweet and melodious.very very very nice, Thanks for sharing

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Unwritten Soul 25 November 2012

Winter eve clouds...and the stars above it (can withstand cold) ...wow how that nature really hypnotized us with the spirit and gorgeousness..Absolutely a nice and detailed poem...a poem that every reader should cheer of...but what's the weird is the using of venus name..we are all Earth-ians right hahaha and well use of unwritten soul term there_Soul

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Xelam Kan™ 25 November 2012

Many a times i was turned hypnotized by this gorgeous reflection of sweet Nature,

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