Venus And Her Consort Comments

Interestingly beautiful poetry.

very beautiful and romantic!

thats ample description to make any woman blush......i am sure u hv written ds for ur life partner......simply beautiful.

Oh my u r d first pakistani i hav read who pens with such a command on poetry and language really! Dis exquisite poem i can't figure why but it makes me rejoice n smile, u hav paintd it in a beauty lady's brush, bravo n alluded it to planetary stuff.

nice description of a beautiful face!

Recommenting... She is, i am so lucky see both of you smiling enjoying day after days...as if the broken flower budding new and fresher one, where the scented air is more intense...to call any bees or butterflies enjoy over its sweetness..Venus has brightening sky to let Mars smile more red on the ground...so beautifully written, wishing you both have greatest and longer happiness...ever and forever! i am so happy with this +_SOul

So beautifully written, she must be so beautiful as much as the title said, Venus and Her consort_Soul

A lovely lyric sung in praise of love and beauty, written with grace and finesse. Metaphors strewn from the first line to the last like gems...the composition itself speaks so powerfully that it feels unnecessary to say anything more about it, kudos Saadat Tahir!

@ poet's notes: quite believable! welcome back with a poem with strongly encoded metaphors, so Ulysses is back after the Odyssey! ! !