Venus Anadyomene Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Venus Anadyomene

Rating: 5.0


Like Venus Anadyomene
You rise from
the torquoise waves
that oceans are made of,
Not a veil
shades your skin
nor your heart.

Hades with its
gossamer shade of sins
gnaws at my heart,
with its tongue forked.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Birth of Venus
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 March 2023

this poem has her everlasting beauty Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 17 February 2023

Eloquent dramatic dialogue. Liked

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Thank you for your time, Venkat

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 March 2022

My rejoinder to Dilipji's post: often find that I have no control how a poem takes shape when is born. It just takes birth as it pleases. So, I cannot insist everyone to read it. It is the poem, who decides, who would read it and enjoy.

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

though I wish that my poems communicate with everyone and everyone reads and enjoys them.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

your specific aspect of poetry. I don't know who likes it or not but it is the broader spectrum of poetry... wonderful

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

It is pleasure reading your notes, sir.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

I often find that I have no control how a poem takes shape when is born. It just takes birth as it pleases. So, I cannot insist everyone to read it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 March 2022

It is the poem, who decides, who would read it and enjoy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

I think you are a great lover of Greek mythology and in

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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