Saturday, January 11, 2014

Venus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh Venus,
goddess of Love,
Born from the Sea,
Take pity,
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Sandra Feldman
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Valerie Dohren 11 January 2014

Your poems are short, but always very lovely Sandra, and this is no exception.

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Sandra Feldman 11 January 2014

The Apostrophe, my mistake, thanks for pointing it out, will change. SF

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Stephen W 11 January 2014

A question: Is the apostrophe intentional? It is ambiguous as it's a common typo. Do you mean And it is tyranny or And its tyranny ?

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