Thursday, February 15, 2018

Venus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Such sadness in the eagles cry.. Out, in the
middle of a darken night.. Sending out a signal
something isn't right.. Even though there's not
a sign, of lightning in sight.. Chipmunk, scurries
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Rebecca Navarre
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2023

Sometimes there are days that we feel this way, a sorrowful state devoid of light. A great write!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2023

Poignant yet beautiful poem. Wonderful poetic expressions with compelling images that depict sadness and darkness. Well crafted and executed write.

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