Thursday, August 6, 2015

Venus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Early morning, evening and night,
I see a star twinkling bright,
I love sweetheart your pleasing light,
Unlike moon, don’t change your sight,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 06 August 2015

Splendid picture to go with a splendid poem! A 10

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2015

A wonderfully penned piece to the evening star and goddess of love

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 August 2015

The bright star performed her duty, Filled my heart with love and beauty! ...... really amusing. A brilliant poem having stunning expression. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Many thanks Akhtar sir....10

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 August 2015

A sweet and beautiful poem.......................................10

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Jaishree Nair 06 August 2015

Well articulated and rhymed.enjoyed the word flow

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